dirty specks of snow
fields in many shades of grey
under a dark sky
change to hazy green and brown
morning in a pale sun's light.
should be a tanka ;-)
nearly daily HAIKU - i hope that says it all. Descriptive, classic haiku describing a moment in our material surroundings at a certain time - and both, time and uncommented picture are important. It has 5 - 7 - 5 pronounced syllables. There will be senryu as well, like a haiku but personal, interpreting. AND i might add a TANKA which is said to be the origin of a haiku with 5/7/5 plus 7/7 "active" syllables.
1 comment:
very good too!
ah, i get the idea now; 5-7-5-7-7.
right then, i may have a go at it later.
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