Saturday, July 28, 2007

Shokado Poems Haiku

Twentyfour poems
gold and silver lines across
like base shining through.

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I am not all happy with the base. I thought of using soul, truth, ground, grounding, foundation, elements and finally decided to use base, as being the word best describing the material and immaterial thing everything is made out of. Any suggestions for a better word?